Calling to you baby at night1
Like a wolf does to the moon2
Knowing you're living in yesterday3
We know it will be tomorrow soon4
I don't have a lot of time5
We make every word count6
Cause you are the first thing I think at night7
When The lights are all turned out8
We may not see the same stars9
Does not mean I do not see you here10
Forever in my mind and my heart- 11
let me make this perfectly clear12
I know I have never felt a love like this13
Where I want to cry with happiness14
Needing you here with me every minute of the day15
I can feel your heart screaming for me16
Never letting this feeling go away17
I feel the same and I cannot breath
Author notes
This is for my baby !!!
I love you *baby*
I know we might be far away!!!
But my love will never change.
Naww 
I hope you like it!!
It is simple; but it is from the heart
Blair
Honest opinions
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Very good...aye love does indeed feel like this at times...that you simply cannot breath without your loved one.
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AWWWWWWWWWW this is sad I hope you great to see you baby
love the poem very good ^^
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is sooo sad that you miss them soo much and that your baby is soo far away but you will always love them and i am sure that htey will always love you t
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i like the clues
the clues indicat that the person you love does not live in the same country as you, as if he lives in yesterday he is in a different timezone, and if he sees different stars to u then he has to be somewhere else, if im wrong then fair enough lol. but still very well done! -
kool
its very well thought out and emotional, it stands out very well and it just oozes with passion, but i come to think, who is this about?
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Same or different stars...same love
Nice free verse and nice emotional contact. A few stanzas stood out, such as: I know I have never felt a love like this13
Where I want to cry with happiness14
We may not see the same stars9
Does not mean I do not see you here10
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breathe,,,baby ,,,breathe
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Beautiful
Aw this is so cute Blair. I love when you write stuff like this because I can tell it really comes from the heart. Great job. =)
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Awww.. that was deep and very poetic. I could feel the raw feeling and wonder in your words.
DarkOne
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