Pleasures only a line away

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They sat on the couch.1

It was a late Friday night. All was quiet.2

She had chosen a simple meal, tender fresh chicken, baked with love. All his favorite herbs and spices, and a glass or Two of red wine complimented her completely.3

She spread her legs over his, Her smile burning through his body. It had been silent for far to long.4

He more than appreciated what she had done.5

Without a blink of an eye, he threw the remote to the floor, the television blaring, reaching forward his hands grabbed her, pulling her to her feet.6

She followed his lead, as he grabbed both her ass cheeks with his hands, raising her high into the air. His teeth leading towards the straps of her nightgown, snatch them tightly with his teeth, he daringly held onto her ass for support while sliding her straps slowly down her shoulders, laying small butterfly kisses as they fell to her elbows.7

Her hands feet his teeth, as he nipped at them cheekily. Together they led her gown down towards her waist.8

Taking a few steps forward he bounced her in his arms, just to watch his babies bounce in the motion of his desires, She looked so beautiful…so precious.9

Her slender body, silken and smooth. His lips could not resist as he slipped his tongue around her thirsty lips. Draining the sweetness, divine in all her glory.10

She had him a halo, ready to break her in Two. She draped her arms around him, pulling him in close. She felt his hands under her firm thighs. Her heart beating faster with ever step he took up those torturous winding stairs.11

Her lips lingered, letting his tongue tempt her, leaving his lips. She let it wander, past his stubble, she loved the roughness against her skin. Swiftly her cheek pressed hard against his, her lips tender and needing, she slipped her tongue across his ear, nibbling his earlobe lightly, then with his reaction, inside a deep groan she bit harder.12

Digging his nails deep into her sensual, seductive skin, he placed her down abruptly, pushing her firmly against the stair case. 13

Moaning she cried her tongue dancing, running circles across his face, down… further, exploring every inch of his skin, as her hands felt of his shoulders, following his hardened grip.14

Gently he picked her again, holding her dangerously over the edge, her back arched over the railing; her breast firmly in his view. Her nipples, hard, stiffened and aching, staring him directly in the eye.15

Greedily without another sound, without another move, he sank his teeth around her nipples, his tongue lapping, surrounding them. His lips consuming them. His insides craved her, his body became loose as the blood shot, running fast, like fire through his body. He felt himself harden as her milky sweet skin tantalized his taste buds.16

Her hands spread wide, her nails sharpened, making fresh wounds on his skin, down the arch and curve of his naked sweating skin. She had a darkened side he had hardly seen, she had held it so deep inside, only ever hinting it inside is curiosity. Now it was her chance. To break him in Two.17

Sliding his hands under her body he pulled her back towards him, pressing both their wanton bodies against the wall. His hands slid down, pulling frantically at the golden laced gown dress they had pulled down towards her waste. With Ease he ripped it of, the light silken material felt like feathers underneath his carnal fingertips. 18

The sounds sent her over the edge, her lips bit hard into his shoulders. Sinking deeper then she expected. She drew her first drop of blood, as it formed on her juicy lips. She licked tastefully, as if trying to open the wound further.19

Her hands met his, by her side, as she led them towards the buckle of his jeans. He hand grabbed a hold of his belt buckle, her fingertips covered in blood as she wiped her lips.20

Shooing her away, his hands brushed hers aside.21

“Not yet baby… Not yet,” he grinned, backing seductively away from her anxious body.22

Frustrated, and soaking inside her panties, she advanced towards him. Her hair sweaty and sticking to her face.23

He backed further away, his hands rubbing the banister vigorously. He tongue clicking, as he backed up against it and sway his hips in a forward . 24

Teasing…tempting…destroying her inside…she pained to have him do deep inside her. Her body hungered him with immense pleasure.25

Stepping up each step he watched her eyes. He wanted her to want this so bad she could kill for this. He knew her secret, and how she wanted to have him wild, she wanted to tear his skin, she wanted to dig her teeth into his flesh, and take every inch of him in her heated skin.26

Faster he moved, slowly she followed. Till their bedroom door was only centimeters away. He stepped inside the door way. His hand sliding towards his own hardened nipples. As they wandered down towards his hardened bulge.27

“Come on Blair…Come on I know you want it...cross that line”

Author notes

AH Ben those simple lines inspired me so much... And Ebb for you erotically dirty poems who triggered the memory..
hope the pic goes well...

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  • Hermanator1 silver member
    August 13

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    EXCELLENT

    Yeah a couple errors but who cares! It was one of those pieces that you rush through because one finds themselves caught up in the thrill of the moment. sex that is just for the thrill of sex. Love the concept!


  • Dont Look Down
    August 13
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    Damn Blair. You rule erotica. So much passion. That is how you have sex! lol


  • eyeambaldman
    August 8

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    A very nice scene of seduction. You can picture the characters and their reactions through the words...that's a good sign. Interesting about the dialogue at the end...interesting choice of names! Hmmm...can we read anything into this? lol


  • So Strange Greeters member
    March 30

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    Hey, Blair. I enjoyed this because it had wonderful imagery, great wordings and a lot of emotions, as well. I also liked the picture, because I have had the image of the woman in between and whatnot in my head before--but with different people being the people.

    Keep up the great work, buddy. I enjoyed this just as I always do with your other stuff in the past and most likely in the future, as well.


  • SeleneStone gold member
    March 29

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    Wow!!! That picture fits perfect and this is beyond amazing. Oh my gosh girl this is so good. You have me... Well... I do hope that you write more of this because it is so incredible. I love how erotic this is and every detail in it is just... Wow!! Excellent!!!
    ~Joann

  • what happened afterwards??????????????????


  • DarkOneShadow silver member
    March 28

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    Yummy

    Very nice description and made me squirm in my seat to readjust myself. God, what pure sensual and sexual delight. Excellent! It leaves me thirsty for more!

    DarkOne


  • Hismercy
    March 28

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    What are the babies names ? (line 16 or 17)

    Now thats how you do sex !

    Not this , Im horney and lets get this done....

    No, a true man will tease, tease and tease some more.

    very erotic,

    Prodigious you did a wonderful job showing passion between the two. Excellent

    Job.

    I have seen no mistakes in the literature, well if one has seen the american game show "Are you smarter than a 5th grader" my grammer sucks and i definetly havent won the game show, yet when stories and great talent come your way, the story comes alive and the critizeem of grammer washes away.

    (raises a wine glass to Ben and Ebb for the ispiration of Prodigious to share the poem inside her.)

    -Hismercy

  • The pic sticks like shit to a blanket, (sorry for bad comment, drug dulled mind) and the imagery is amazing. Ive read snippets and seeing the big picture makes this even more lustful. Glad I could inspire this, such a hot read.

    Ily.!!!

    Ebb

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